Critters, being president of a hunting club is the most thankless job anyone can have. You would think that grown men could always do the right thing but you'll be surprised at the challenges you'll have!!! Looks like you're doing the right thing. Make sure to be as specific as possible with rules.
Are you sure you know what you're getting yourself into?!?!? Past and present hunting club presidents know exactly what I'm talking about here!!!

I'm sure you know!
Here would be a small percentage of suggestions and I certainly don't want to get into your business so know that I'm just offering my help.
People don't like a lot of rules but when you get more than 2-4 hunters together, something will happen and members will get mad about it and as president, you'll have to address it. I believe in addressing it before it happens. Rules are written for that ONE member. That one member that pushes the envelope and upsets all the other members!!!
Ok, some things to consider:
* One thing... don't box yourself into a corner with #7 as there are more violations than you listed that would justify expulsion from the club. You may want to say this: A member may be expelled from the club for any number of ethics, game, safety or club violations without a refund.
* I suppose the guest fee is $50 "per day" and a member is going to ask you this: "My friend Billy is going to hunt just an hour tomorrow morning and go home, so does he still have to pay $50? Your answer will of course be, Yes. Then your member may ask this question: Well, can Billy go with me and just sit in the woods while I hunt? He won't have a gun." Be prepared to address this issue.
* Signing out to hunt. How soon can members sign-out to hunt? The night before? The morning of the hunt? In what order?
* How about guests and signing-out to hunt? I personally believe that hunting clubs should be for the "Paying Member" and not necessarily guests. So, do guests get to sign-out before a member does? If members get first choice of stands/areas before guests, when will guests be allowed to sign-out to hunt? I'd address this issue.
I personally believe that guest should wait until all paying members have signed-out before they are allowed to pick a hunting area or field. You'll also need to set a cut-off time. I.E. Guests may sign-out "after" (pick your time) 5 a.m. and 2:30 p.m.
* If you have a camphouse, you're going to have to address some rules about it. I.E. Leaving dirty dishes in the sink or not taking out the trash; muddy boots; leaving the place a wreck! If you're responsibly for taking out trash, I would include this rule: NO liquids are allowed in the trash!! If you have ever taken the trash off from your hunting club and it leaks of stale beer or spoiled milk, you'll know why this rule should be in place!!!
* This always happens too.... a member or a guest will ride past another member or guest at 4:30 p.m. (prime hunting time) coming back to the camp b/c he/she has killed a deer or needs to leave camp early. It goes without saying that this is not fair to the hunting member whose deer scatter when that vehicle or 4-wheeler comes by! Without a doubt, LOL, this will happen sooner or later. Obviously, you cannot block off the main road but you may want to consider no traffic times on certain roads. I have had hunters/guests/member's kids ride past my shooting house on a 4-wheeler 30 mins before dark. You can imagine my frustration! You'd think they'd know better and they're all very sorry for it but come on!!! This is bad for the one member who hunts one weekend out of the year and this happens to him!!
* How many bucks/does is each paying member allowed? Are the bucks/does "transferable" from one member to another? Bob/guests have killed three bucks so far and his friend Joe, who is a paying member is going to transfer one of his allowable bucks to Bob so Bob and his guests can continue to hunt. Is this allowed? It'll happen!
* Stands/shooting houses... A member will erect a shooting house/stand on the ONLY sensible spot or pine tree available overlooking a cutover and say: "That's my shooting hse/stand and no one can hunt it!!!" You better address it!
* Members may want to go out "looking and riding around" to see deer at night. Some members won't care if other members do this... some members will get pissed!
* Safety issue here. All dads are not as safety-minded as you are when it comes to kids. If you have a camphouse, you might want to consider making it a rule that all guns, when brought into the camphouse should have actions open. I always get worried when I see a kid swinging a gun around and leaning it up against a smooth surface and if the gun is indeed unloaded!
* If your buck harvest rule is 3.5 yr old bucks and older, you'll have a member that will kill a buck and not want to bring it by for any member to see. This will be an issue as the buck may be a 2.5 yr old pencil-racked 12" spread buck.
* Address a paying member's immediate family now. Are spouses and children considered guests? In most clubs, spouses and children (there should be an age limit on children) are not considered "guests". HOWEVER, you should address this: A member may have twin sons who are 17 yrs old, two brothers 15 and 13 and a hunting wife and they hunt every weekend... all of them! I know about two situations like this and it caused major problems/division with other members.
I suggest that you come up with a maximum number of hunters a paying member can have hunting at one time. There are dads out there with lots of children (even under 18) and a wife that may all want to hunt at the same time and in different locations on the property!!! Better address it now.
* Also, may the spouse and/or children of a paying member hunt without the paying member being there?
*Have a sentence at the end of your rules that binds the member to abide by the rules and leaves no doubt that he/she may be expelled from the club w/o a refund.
I.E. I, __________________ (print name) understands these rules and agree to abide by these rules and fully understand that if I violate any ethics, safety, game or club rules, I am subject to expulsion from XYZ Hunting Club without a refund.
_______________________________ Date __-__-____ Get them to sign it and date it and you keep one copy at home and one at the camphouse.
* Keep a copy of the rules at the camphouse or sign-out board.
If you have ten members, all ten may be wonderful members however, often times, it is always "one" member that makes your life miserable dealing with him! That one member that violates every non-written rule out there which makes you have to have everything written down. He'll violate that "unwritten" rule and claim he's done nothing wrong b/c there's not a written rule about it in the club rules!! Oh boy the pain in the ass that one member causes!!!
I'm sure I'll be faulted for being so specific and detailed but I bet there are some Aldeer members on here that have been president of a hunting club and have had to deal with issues at a hunting club!!!!
I'm kinda chuckling as I know the extreme commitment you're taking and all the issues that may come up!!!
Sorry for the long post but I type fast and there are so many things to consider.

It takes a lot of time and money to set up a foundation to a hunting club.
Great luck with it!!!